Rule 3 and 4 explained my thoughts entirely; long verbs destroy the tenseness and poetic -ness
(If that's a word.) of a story or poem. A word like muttered, for example, can make the piece loud. Showing of the authors apparent greatness, yet the book or story is not about the writers greatness, it's about this amazing story, the fabulous characters. An authors book can show their greatness; not the word 'muttered' .
That is my personal opinion,
Lily Johnson Class 3.
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